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04 December 2007 @ 04:40 pm
French Poetry -- FTW?!  
Yo this is turning into my once-every-two-month writing journal or something. Is that a bad thing? I don't think many people want to read updates on my busy busy life, so I'll leave it at that.

Anyway, as the title says, ZOMG!ITSFRENCHRUNINFEAR! Yeah. We had to write poems in French class, so I thought I'd share. I hate poetry, though it sounds better in another language. So here it is: my hardly-making sense French love poem. (My teacher has a thing for love poems, and it creeps me out eeeeeeever so slightly.)

Title: Se Taire
Author: Me duh. as seen by my craptastic french skillz
Rating: G it would be scary to read something to the class NOT G-rated...
Genres: Drama, Romance (eww)
Word Count: 114
Warnings: I warned you many times it was French. Crappy French. And a whole lot of synonyms.




C’est la douleur vous sentez
Quand il voie une autre
Ne gaspille pas votre temps
Il n’inquiétera pas trop longue

Timidité

C’est l’angoisse vous montrez
Quand il ne te salue
Vous gâchez vos émotions
Certainement il n’apercevra non plus

Lâcheté

C’est la souffrance vous dépeignez
Vous saviez comment il se sent
Ce n’est pas vous qu’il cherche
Vous n’êtes pas si complexant

Appréhension

C’est le tourment vous exhiberez
Quand il te repousse de côté
Pouviez-vous prendre la parole?
Où bien vous aviez trop de fierté?

Anxiété

C’est l’inquiétude vous fournissiez
Quand il dit ses adieux
Mais demain n’arrivera jamais
Aujourd’hui elle était fallacieuse

À cause de ta
Timidité
Lâcheté
Appréhension
Anxiété
Il ne saura jamais
 
 
I'm: indescribable
Listening to: Skid Row - Little Shop of Horrors
 
 
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p3charmer[info]p3charmer on December 4th, 2007 11:30 pm (UTC)
I told you it was beaufiful! magnifique~! and it rhymes aussi:) I actually want to write one next semester. Although now that I think about it, it is un peu creepy that Danciu wanted one.
Hinata-hime[info]thewhitelotus on December 5th, 2007 12:42 am (UTC)
Forget 'un peu'. Try 'beaucoup'.
Thankfully he's been in a good mood lately and hasn't asked us to present yet...
lito_elixir[info]lito_elixir on March 18th, 2008 05:05 am (UTC)
BONJOUR
tu es un
bonjour
oui oui

I really lack french. Anywho, thank you for your invite and welcome. I hope you're having a good evening/night/morning, whatever time it is right now.